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Read beyond the Madness |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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Everything seems wrong and everything is misguided and everything is all black and white and all i can see is madness Even though i can breathe I'm sweating with claustrophobia as i watch my mind slip through into a solitary world of madness Everything is absent from my fearless flesh and blood while i look into my heart and all i find is madness I make myself translucent to let you in so you can read me the way i read beyond this madness But now i just seem wrong and i'm just misguided and my life is all black and white and all i can see is madness Silhouetted by Deception |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
HEY MAN!! this was awesome as Lor OIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII CALL ME I LEFT A MESSAGE ON UR ANSWER PHONE! lol neway back to the poem, mi vision of it was as if you were spiralling down deeper and deeper into the world of madness!! awesome Luv yaz BEX |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
OOOOOOOOOooh this is an awesome one of yours, i bookmarked it, *squeals* i love it so much. B.T.W how do i get a signature? luv the poem, Luv, Courts |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
heye dude i no hu courts is!!! :P i love this one, its not as complex as ur other ones, more honest i think cool. keep it up. i cant write ne morte. lost all passion in it. i dont find i get anything out of it nemore. gone is all fun in it. i feel so detatched these days.  call uYou can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Good poem, very dark, painful imagery. I enjoyed. |
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