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Gothika_07
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-02-08 12:07 PM


marbelized flesh contorts around me
as i succumb to the icy embrass feeling free
stone hard skin is entangled with mine
arms seductivley travel like vine

i push myself harder into him wanting a taste
his body moves with mine without fear or haste
we collapse to the ground still together
his kisses sharp and passtionite linger forever

my sharp fingers dig into his mat of hair
the heat is rising in the air
i tear at his clothes begging for more
his laugh and chuckle haunting my core

my godly lover immortal in my arms
luring me with his sauve charms
then it happens the sensual hideous moment
when i feel the endless pulling with enjoyment

his godly mouth surrounds my neck, and i feel it
blood rich and lustful dulling me as if i were hit
my life is being sucked out without a fight
but i give up there is no pain only slight

i slip further into the endless darkness
but his words come loving without harshness
"my love my death my child,come to the night"
"come be with me for all eternity,we'll take flight"

my body numbs with death, no fear
then his blood flows through me, with care
i am being born again, child of lust
i fear nothing , as i swril in the dust

eyes retelling things unseen
things disturbing and unclean
for now i am the graceful i am the feared
not any more am i the person that no one cared

for all eternity, forever i will rule
feeding, revenge, lust i have my full
then maybe one day when i have nought
i will see the sunrise an know no doubt

cherish me while you have me i am your death
i am your sinner, i am your avenger your death
and then i am gone



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darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
1 posted 2004-02-08 02:58 AM


PHEW

man
i am sweating!!

as soon as i started reading i was thinking... bex! YOU EROTIC GIRL

then i realised... heehee

you vampy girl!

very very cool!

keep rokin
darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-02-09 12:07 PM


I liked it.  Kinda sedductive.  Kinda tease. lol.  Nice write.

-GIS

Why live for gold when you can be happy?

[...and the work, it was fun.]-Kurt Cobain

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-02-09 10:43 PM


LOL SAME SOPH!
HEHE I THOUGHT IT WAS A VERY 'silhouetted by deception' type poem if u no wat i mean bexy
lol but it turned out to be such a good vampy one
OMG BEX PLZ RING ME ABOUT GOTHIKA
LuV lOr

Silhouetted by Deception

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