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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada 
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I'm losing my head to the meaningless existance that i lead i cut the cosmos with my screams but no cares there's no one out there I'm not yet broken, in my dream I win but out here I'm nothing i'm useless worthless in my head i'm the queen of my castle but out here i'm burnt out washed up my castle's crumbled into the sea don't crucify me i don't need your mind games poisoning my soul i can do that all on my own in my mind i'm no loser though the bad dreams won't stop but out here i'm screwed up messed up a castaway in the sands of time in my dreams i have and want not and though there i feel no pain out here you hurt me again with your hot words and lust thoughts i should beat this but out here i'm no one unwanted un-needed in my head my screams cut the cosmos but out here i don't care i'm out of it losing it better than trying to make out here ~To see the world in a grain of sand And heaven in a wild flower, Hold infinity in the palm of your hand And eternity in an hour.--> Blake~ [This message has been edited by barbaraj (02-08-2004 10:27 AM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
it was pretty good. a little on the repeative side. Sad, but still hopefull. In that you can be you when your with you. I know that feeling. Good write. ~Lex |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
It appears you've found something good in your life. Keep writing! Grover. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
thankyou soo much i loved that just wat i needed!! omg u rock i love this part here: i don't need your mind games poisoning my soul i can do that all on my own GREAT writing mate luv always LOR Silhouetted by Deception |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this |
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