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Dark Poetry #4

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darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2004-02-26 07:39 PM

meant for none
alone I fall
like dead leaves
upon the ground
all used up
nothing more to give
bloodless cut
revealing the deepened wound
drive it further
twist and laugh
the jaded picture
the shattered frame
of mind
tattered
as pages torn from
an epic novel
unread and caked with dust
forgotten
unknown
and rotting away...

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-02-26 07:53 PM

as pages torn from
an epic novel
unread and caked with dust
forgotten
unknown
and rotting away...

nice....

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-02-26 09:47 PM

the jaded picture
the shattered frame
of mind

dark. very dark.

liked it alot

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-02-26 10:10 PM

I loved it, i can't explain which part i liked best, because its all great.

However long the night, the dawn will break.

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

4 posted 2004-02-27 06:23 PM

thanks...it's been a long time since I've posted on here.

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