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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-12-20 03:31 PM



Why did you write those
immortal words to me.
Panic flowing through my veins,
and the heart breaking sobs
echoing my already
broken body.

at least you didn't say it..

don't ever say it, for i don't
love you. you don't love me,
come to think of it.

please don't love me, for i am
empty and hollow, incapable of
feelings on such a level, and i
will only hurt you, abuse you, and use you,
leave you dying on the floor,
surrounded by yet another
pool of blood.

at least you didn't say it..

don't ever say it..

Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it.

© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
1 posted 2004-12-20 04:15 PM


oh dear

dahling are you online? i got your text but have no money.
umm i dont know what to say. i can't say it on here... i will email you

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-12-20 07:00 PM


It makes for a nice show... and maybe you think this is rude, but I'm not going easy, (your CC message) it sounds like its all just for looks.  
And I read your sig.  Pride is more like self-righteous arrogance.  

-GIS

My guitar's name is Jennifer.

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
3 posted 2004-12-20 07:10 PM


Well now, an interesting write. I remember feeling like that. Only hoping, unspoken, that it would be just the opposite. Hmmm...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-12-20 11:02 PM


is this about 'the letter'???

omg! eeeek! i need to talk to ya!!

cool write...

Laura

you're the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
5 posted 2004-12-21 12:24 PM


I don't know what to say, my head's spinning, when I go to bed I'm grinning, like a fella once said, ain't that a kick in the head? Soz, been listening to one Ron singing that all weekend and waiting for the other Ron to join in. Sigh. Here comes my song, Brown Eyed Girl......Hey where did we go? Days when the rain came? Down in the hollow, playing a new game, laughing and running, hey hey, skipping and a jumping....(misses words).... Brown Eyed Girl! You my Brown Eyed Girl!
I like this song, it makes me feel better about myself. I don't know why I'm telling you this. Maybe because you must have something that makes you feel better about yourself, and you should play it, listen to it, get it out. I don't know.
Nice write, sad though.

Hollow.
Courtney.

You just got to see me through another day
My body's achin' and my time is at hand
And I won't make it any other way

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