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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2004-02-07 05:44 AM


this lil white dog
came up to me the other day
and followed me around all afternoon
i think somehow he knew what i was feeling
and didnt want to leave me alone
i was really down and didnt know
how to tell anyone
what was going through my mind
until i stopped and sat down
he jumped up onto my lap
looking at his collar i saw the name francois
and fro some reason i started to tell him everything
it was flying out of my mouth
before i could stop it coming
everyhting went to this lil white dog
that found me when i was down,
followed mem until i stopped
and took the time to say what
was going on in my head

now im feeling a thousand times better
than i have in ages
i dont know how
and i dont know why
but talking to lil francois
really helped me
outta my rut

the only thing i have to do now is give him back to his owner........


this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!
i am woman hear me roar

© Copyright 2004 Ruth - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2004-02-07 09:04 AM


I hope you do give him back to his owner... he/she most probably pours their heart out to him too.  I'm glad you got out of your rut. (Ehem... you have a number of typing errors in your poem)  All the best

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-02-09 12:56 PM


i loved this soo much
do u mind if i bookmark?
well i am anyway
THANKYOU

Silhouetted by Deception

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2004-02-09 05:04 AM


francois was a dog that my family and i look after when the owner is away or in hospital.....
this was something i needed to get off my chest and well talking to francois was a really good way for me to do it.... because he doesnt interrupt and doesnt fall asleep while im talking... like he actually wants to listen.....
any way feel free to bookmark any of my poems and thankyou for the replies.
Mel

this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!
i am woman hear me roar

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