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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is really a follow on from another poem called faces in the teen poetry forum why is it i feel this way? why is it i cant do? anything about what im going through? why cant i think straight? why is it i cant be who i truly am? with out putting on this old, wearing through, falling apart face??? why am i so scared to show my true colours? without being worried about being called fake? why cant i just be me??? not what everyone wants me to be? Y?Y?Y?Y?Y? am i so scared to be me????? the poem faces basically gives you the overview of where this is coming from.... this is me.... like it or not.... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey mel. this one is very very good. I havent read faces... but im sure I would enjoy this one better if I had read it., i really like this one, reminds me of a quote "these complicated questions take up all the empty space inside me, but complicated questions never did me any justice anyway" so true well done!!! keep them coming  darknessYou can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I think I'll go check out Faces, but this seems like a question I could answer since I come from the same walk. if you really want my answer e-mail me. Sorry if I seem a lil invasive. GIS Why live for gold when you can be happy? |
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