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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
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0 posted 2004-02-05 06:25 PM



When I first saw you, I looked in your eyes.
I gave my love and trust to those eyes, then and there.
And whenever I saw them, I fell even deeper into them.
I began to believe in your lies, letting you manipulate me with your powerful weapon.
But who would believe that golden eyes could hurt anyone?
Who would let anything come between them and the person they thought they loved?
Everyday i fell further into those eyes, not seeing the lack of love in them.
Too gold and strong to see beyond them.
But now i know that those eyes were only lies of your world.
Now i know your eyes had secrets of lust and distrust.
Now i see the fool i was to them, i see the fool i was for you.
But now those eyes haunt the dreams that were once of love for them.
I now cannot look into eyes of beauty.
Now i do not believe in love or love of life.
You have broken me.
And all because you looked at me with those golden eyes.

Silhouetted by Deception

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darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
1 posted 2004-02-05 06:30 PM


hey very very cool

nice concept going on...
i thort u used now i know and but now i know
a few too many times...
just my opinion tho

very hardcore

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

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