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Kazeru
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since 2003-12-16
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0 posted 2004-02-04 03:35 PM



Innocence fallen from it's pedistal
A scream
Piercing the very essence of humanity
No one knows
A secret between you and me
I won't tell
Thriving on the darkness
The thoughts of sorrow
Call me
Your guilty consience

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

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eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2004-02-05 12:45 PM


ah the innerspace of human thought...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-02-05 10:42 AM


Sounds like the sub-conscious mind and the impulses we sometimes get to be "mad."

GIS

a trickle of music fromm a well
let it spill and roar like hell

[...see a lot up there but don't be scared.  Who needs actions when we got words?]

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-02-05 07:05 PM


i loved the last bit

Silhouetted by Deception

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