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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
He sits next to them Again I am disregarded He chats to them like noones there Of any importance, that is He acts like he doesn’t notice How pathetic their attempts to grab his attention are Her hair dances across her shoulder As he tounge rolls across her lips His eyes refuse to move From her perfect, perfect face He leans back casually They all lean towards him in anticipation I watch knowing what will happen next I am the puppet master Controlling them slyly Only I know how badly I want to be Part of my own puppet show Her smile screams “I want you” As her eyes take in every part of his georgous body He is entrapped in her game And enchanted by her One of them rubs her foot casually up his leg He jumps back, as if unaware that would happen I laugh to myself Today my puppets are playing up But again they go back to normal Flirting like its contagious And laughing like a can-of-laughs He soaks in her attention Lets her in to where I wanna be She just touches his thigh And shares a secret with him They pounce then Tearing at her to get his attention They want her gone, gone like I do They want him to notice them Make them feel special for one second The puppets follow the script exactly Her lips dance across his And her hand stroaks his face perfectly His touches her back in all the right places And makes her feel special for a day The puppets shuffle off To go and have a sulk This is the part where I am different from them They can go off to play with another guy I stay And watch him fall into her I feel my pain increase as I realise This is all hes worth to her Hes just a game she wants to play But will toss to the bottom of her cupboard tomorrow Depression draws me into its lair Where I succumb to its powers once again His face is forever tattooed to the inside of my eye-lids While I am just “that girl” in his class. You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
And you claimed that you couldn't write good!!!! Vagabon the Lost One |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Whoa. This was awesome. I loved it. This was a beautifully written poem/story. Sometimes people dont see that girls do that kind of stuff to guys too, and i mean it hurts to have to just sit back and watch. You got the point across amazingly!!!  ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Love this is amazing this is so awesome. Eek! Hey i was just wondering, is this really a guy in your class????????? Hollow However long the night, the dawn will break. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
They all lean towards him in anticipation LOLOLOLOLOL sorry that was hilarous NOW FOR MY SERIOUS REPLY i loved this OMFG I LOVED THIS "today my puppets are playing up" loved that line and i love ur writing AGREED VAGABOND! WHAT WAS HSE HTINKING??? SHE CAN WRITE BEEPING GOOD LOVE U LOR In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey dude/ettes! courts: total fictional character... dont get too excited! (lol) LOR: I KNEW THAT ONE WOULD CRACK YOU UP... I ALMOST DID IT ON PURPOSE TO CRACK U UP! kissa: thanks heaps for your reply!! vagabond: i meant i couldnt bring myself to write. thanx guys for replying and even bothering to read, i spent ages on this one, i really wanted to make it good. catch yas on the flipside keep rockin darkness You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
one hu sees all can truly control all that one sees thats wot i always think soph u hve this amazing ability 2 sit back and watch. then u can put every thibng u see into a truly magical poem. "i see hell in ur eyes" Bex xoxox |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I really liked it a lot. The imagery was great. Puppets...nice |
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