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NightFall
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since 2004-01-28
Posts 88
The land known as England

0 posted 2004-02-02 01:17 PM


The rain is cold
The waters red
Ihave a cut upon my head

The night is dark
Your hands are cold
You did this to me
Why be so bold?

I love you so, why dont you love me?
Did i hurt you or do something wrong
Because i need to know, please tell me.

My hands are red
As i have a cut up on my head.

You did this to me.

© Copyright 2004 Cheryl Jones - All Rights Reserved
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2004-02-05 12:48 PM


thats not too nice now is it

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

NightFall
Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88
The land known as England
2 posted 2004-02-05 12:57 PM


What is that suposed to mean its the bare truth of a friend of mine.

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-02-05 09:00 PM


it was niice
i liked it
cept for the end about the head

Silhouetted by Deception

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