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Calipso's crying
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Calipso's crying |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
Calipso's crying In a shadowed field i am a flower Calipso's dying In a deserted house i have the power Calipso's falling I dont listen for i dont hear Calipso's calling I dont feel for i dont care Calipso's failing You are an evil a source Calipso's wailing You are the blood running its coarse Calipso's feeling Your own love depicts my memories Calipso's healing Your own mind is my indentities And calipso finally leaves And when Calipso is the one that grieves Your blanket of feeling will wash over your washs of kisses creating a cover Of madness |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
im not sure i get it. i dont see the storyline/purpose.... dnt take it personally. maybe im just not in the right frame of mind Please answer, I'm calling just to find out if you could be there for me when I crack - finger 11 |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
yer neither I loved it up to the last paragraph where i became confused looool btw this is laura on her new account LUV YER LoR Silhouetted by Deception |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
i take it calipso is a person...... nicely written but i agree very confusing in how it is written.... nice ne ways.... Mel this is me.... like it or not.... |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
well wot it basically is, is calipsos a memory that somebody else has and theyre reliving it but the person reliving it is mad like mental type thing. its basically a split personality thing where one personilty is killign the otha off and in the end calipso a memory has beeen killed off by madness vry complicated but jst us ur imagination on this one |
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