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Dark Poetry #4

Roads

zodiac
New Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 2

0 posted 2004-01-27 04:02 PM

the roads are so irreparably mysterious
trees punctuate their clocks with flint comma
even silent they flee alone
all echoes are orphans
loneliness
is a
game

shadow’s software infects roads with traveller snakes
a current compass to bring you further
like a hangman drinking your nerves
in black you circle pi
a corridor
with no
end

your house is the black point where you were forgotten
a strategic calendar of suicide
even silent you flee alone
your echoes are orphans
UBIquity
has a
brain

P.S. the morphology of the poem is not the one desired. Enjoy

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2004-01-27 06:39 PM

hi, and welcome to pip, your poem was intresting but lacking direction..

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

zodiac
New Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 2

2 posted 2004-01-27 07:04 PM

Thanks EOR! It was my intention to bring issues in the chaos of evasion. But, like I said this poem doesn't have its original morphology, the paper version is even more confuse then this one... Anyway to know what are your directions you need to be Charles BUKOWSKI:"Love is a dog from hell" .

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