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Dark Poetry #4

Lost and Never Found

Vagabond
Member

since 2004-01-23

Posts 163

0 posted 2004-01-27 04:01 PM

Lost forever.
The pain was so much heavier
It overrode the emotion of joy
Lost forever.
Never to be found again.

Vagabon the Lost One

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-01-29 12:06 PM

wow
i read that through several times and I seem to get different ideas about it. The first time I thought you were lost forever, then i though the pain was, then I was confused. I ahve come to the final desicion that I think you are lost forever.
This was a really good peice of poetry! I loved how much emotion you managed to fit into such a small poem.

Well done.

I actually liked how you needed to read it through and think about then come to your own personal desicion.

Did you create it that way intentionally? if you did WOW cause I find that so hard to do!!

keep them coming!

rock on

darkness

Please answer, I'm calling just to find out if you could be there for me when I crack - finger 11

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-01-29 01:33 PM

short and bitter sweet.
I liked

-GIS

Hatered and lies go hand-in-hand, while love is always truth.

[I do it for the love... ...I do it from the bottom of my heart.]-Smile Empty Soul

Vagabond
Member

since 2004-01-23

Posts 163

3 posted 2004-01-29 04:59 PM

Thx I'll try and write more

Vagabon the Lost One

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