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Gothika_07
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-01-26 02:41 AM


I clutch at the diminishing light
trying to win this tiring fight
chest pounded and broken and i'm dying
lips swollen and cracked but i'm trying

i feel a shadow cast over my face
my heart quickens to a panicked pace
breath leaves my lethargic lungs
i hear a thousands of waggling tongues

as heat licks at my flesh like a dog 2 a bone
and your sickly voice cold begins 2 drowne
but for you my mind is closed
it always has been i supposed

i try not to cry because i know im losing
but my mind wont give up keeps refusing
then a happy light clear and free
has encircled itself around me

and now i see the flames devour and eat
but i feel nothing only a sad defeat
but i am 2 far away to feel this pain
the witch in their hearts has been slain

© Copyright 2004 Gothika_07 - All Rights Reserved
serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-01-26 02:44 AM


SUITS U SOOO BAAAD!!!
LOL ITS SOO UU BEXUS
reed mine!
LUV LOR

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-01-26 02:52 AM


AND U REMIND ME OF MY GOOD FRIEND TABITHA!!!!
LUVD IT MANNNN

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK
3 posted 2004-01-26 08:04 AM


Dear Gothika_07

Great piece of work.  Keep it up.  I will look for more of your stuff.

Loved it!

Sylvia

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
4 posted 2004-01-27 12:59 PM


hey

AS A WISE ONE LASS ONCE SED

SOOOO YOU BEX!!!!!

hehe

so classic you... loved the twist at the end

keep ,posting

catch u on the flipside

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2004-01-27 10:59 AM


I agree with everyone else this was good.  I don't get on that often but I'll be looking for more of your work when I do.

GIS

Hatered and lies go hand-in-hand, while love is always truth.

[I do it for the love...  ...I do it from the bottom of my heart.]-Smile Empty Soul

Vagabond
Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163

6 posted 2004-01-27 11:57 AM


Poe!

Vagabon the Lost One

NightFall
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since 2004-01-28
Posts 88
The land known as England
7 posted 2004-01-28 02:55 PM


That was sooo cool i love it. cant wait to read more of your stuff.
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