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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-01-21 12:38 PM

It’s been five years (since)
the fields knew
the apples
and the falling pears.
This turning caption
how could I notice
with a dousing swear,
those moments
and he –
who came from that columned lair.
When light
within this mind
sipped at the will of darkness.
Casting the inevitable
lining, that part of us
passing-
I called
for his name.
The Moon Man
is who I am.
We long
for the same.
The gossamer of time
and carrier of bones.
I am the one,
the one who knows-
and from the light
known to others
you know, I know,
and I know, you know,
following
till the cause is ready to sow.
Searching
the everlasting
through vanilla cultured teachings
and castaway feelings.
You know, I know,
since the fields
once knew.
The apples, and
the falling pears.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-01-21 05:36 PM

MysticPoe~
There are some creatively unique thoughts in this piece~

I am in admiration of the talented thoughts on display~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

2 posted 2004-01-22 03:08 PM

My goodness - this is so beautiful. The words were perfectly chosen and I liked the line breaks. I know this poem is in no way upbeat, yet it doesn't seem quite dark to me. The feeling it presented was kindof calming. I really liked this. I think I have to read it a couple more times.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2004-01-27 06:05 PM

"The gossamer of time
and carrier of bones.
I am the one,
the one who knows-
and from the light
known to others"

yep, i'm glad i came back on this site to find some things by you, nice write.

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2004-01-29 10:46 PM

Marge, good to hear from you again, and thanks for the much appreciated complement. Thanks for stopping by.

Endlessecho, at times dark can be calming. For who knows where it comes from? Thanks for the VERY kind comments.

eor, my man we're you been? My favorite critic. We must be some type of soul mates. Thanks for the up-lifting, my fellow poet. Hey, I've been on some other sites lately. e-mail me if you want to shop around. Later.

wayne
waynedenio@verizon.net

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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