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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2004-01-19 05:31 AM

This Depression

Heavy distortion
Through the darkness that invades
Everything inside

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

1 posted 2004-01-19 04:03 PM

Well described. Wonderfully written in great simplicity.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-01-20 11:45 AM

hugsss lady....good to see you posting, this is so sad, but well understood!

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-20 01:17 PM

You nailed that demon right on!

Life is but a magical mystery
~ Blessed Be ~

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-01-21 12:17 PM

Simple
Brutal
Sad

amazing

wow
I know that feeling oh too well

awesome stuff

keep posting in here, love to read more of ur stuff

Hardcore

darkness

Never be alone, let darkness and shadows become your companions

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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5 posted 2004-02-08 10:24 AM

Thank you for replying everyone.

I don't write much poetry anymore, this is the first one in over a year. My muse has pretty much run away without me *chuckles*

Tara

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-02-26 06:54 AM

Very sad post..hope everything is OK....even though it was sad it still spoke to me...

Hope things are better for you soon....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

7 posted 2004-02-26 03:50 PM

Short and sad.

Depression is the one thing i feel the most, and hate the most.

Very amazin'!
Hope to hear more of your stuff soon!

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkstar
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

8 posted 2004-02-26 07:47 PM

Short but definately exact. Nice.

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

9 posted 2004-02-26 07:57 PM

didnt tickle my fancy

i see the simplicity was meant for the effect but i felt it needed just a little more to complete the understanding

it was all right

LOR

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

10 posted 2004-02-27 06:09 PM

distorted, that is truely how everything is when depression overwhelms a person.
but through that difference and distortion can come beauty and new ideas, that why I fear...the leaving of my pain.
great thoughts.
~Lex

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