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Gothika_07
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-01-18 09:35 PM


you cringe as i yell at you
yet you stay still as a statue
stubborn and adoring still
until one day i'll make the kill
to get you away from me
so ur not my liability

after this fight
we can get this right
you think and hope
you know you could neva cope

and this angers me more
i make a move to the door
but i see the deep unrealenting pains
the coarses through your tightening viens
i freeze for a while
deny this denial

my eyes fill with mournful tears
i wish i didnt feel these fears
so i ease my hand from the door
but then memories begin to conjure

blood soaked skin
stretched so thin
a horrific and hideous yell
i wake up to a living hell
and remember why i was leaving
there was no time for my greiving

i look back into your eyes
and remeber those vendictive lies
i will be your prisoner forever
being free i will never

i am the princess in the tower
but i hve no prince, jst evil wiv power

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darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
1 posted 2004-01-19 12:08 PM



gasp

dudette that was hardcore!!!

i loved it heaps!!!

it so amazingly good... wow

its so diofferent from wat u usually do yaknow??? u used simple words !!! tee hee

post more.

catch u on the flipside

rock on

Darkness

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2004-01-19 12:09 PM


the scary grinning face was supposed to be a shoked face... sry!! :$
cusick
Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

3 posted 2004-01-19 09:16 AM


Leave love and find yourself peace. Maggie
serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-01-20 01:33 AM


HEY BEXUS!!!
Laura here if ya didnt no...
I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THE LAST PARAGRAPH

i am the princess in the tower
but i hve no prince, jst evil wiv power

I LOVE IT SOO MUCH BEXUS

OMG BEX!!!!!!!

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

Endlessecho
Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself
5 posted 2004-01-20 04:55 PM


Very real.  I could see it all.  Feel it.  Great expression of the raw emotion - not prettied up.  confused, jumbled, uncertain - unfortunately - very real.
Vagabond
Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163

6 posted 2004-01-24 09:52 PM


-flop- *fellover with saprise to keep me from hiveing to say anything*
(I don't know what to say)
  (I'll try)

I really liked it.
I could fell it and see it i loved it!!!

Vagabon the Lost One

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