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Gothika_07
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since 2004-01-15
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new zealand

0 posted 2004-01-16 05:59 AM



shadow covers the evil face
your evil yurns for a place
in this world of judgement and pains
evil pumps through blood blue viens
as you touch me with ice cold skin
you lick you lips and rub  your chin
these movements i remember vividly
i look back and think of you lividly
black tears  stain ashen cheeks
black salty water doth leaks
dribbling past my swollen lips
bruising and scars cover arms and hips
until one day it dawns on me
a perfect piece of serenity
i pack my bags slam the door
leave your stuff upon the floor
as my eternal scars begin to bleed
but through happiness i take now heed
because i soon know scars heal
and one day i will truly feel
love is like a drug, it kills and its addictive
but love is not supposed to be vendictive
so i hate you for what you turned it into
and someday soon i'll forget all about you

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Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
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1 posted 2004-01-16 06:13 PM


Yes,,,,good move,,and oh so true
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Gothika_07
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand
2 posted 2004-01-16 07:07 PM


this has not happened to me personally, id jst like to say.
thnx 4 ur reply.
hpe 2 read sum of urs soon.
xxgothikaxx

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
3 posted 2004-01-17 01:15 AM


hey!

lovin it dahl

good as it always is!!!
as my eternal scars begin to bleed
but through happiness i take now heed
thats my fav bit
vv cool

talk to ya l8a

darkness

Never be alone, let darkness and shadows be your friends

Gothika_07
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand
4 posted 2004-01-17 05:06 AM


hey fat head.
this was mi fav poem outta the three.
lolz lovd ur one!

xxgothikaxx

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
5 posted 2004-01-18 03:42 AM


rando its my fav too!!!

ok incase u hadnt noticed my new obsession is the wrod hardcore... i just cnt stop saying it..
sry this isnt exactly bout ur poem but wat the hey! (omg i sound like laura!!!)

ok well neways catch you on the flipside ( oh yer thats mY goodbye now)

rock hardcore

darkness

serenities_blood
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
6 posted 2004-01-20 01:44 AM


wat the hey!
ISNT IT FUN SOUNDING LIKE ME???

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

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