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Dark Poetry #4

acknowledgment

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-01-15 09:49 PM

across a crowded room you stand
acoss the ocean and the land
acoss the raging angry sea
but can you ever acknowlege me?
for to be seen you must be there
but i am neither there nor here
and in the end at last you'll see
the pain that you inflicte on me

Xonicx
Junior Member

since 2004-01-14

Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

1 posted 2004-01-16 12:02 PM

~but i am neither there nor here~

Dr. Suess? hehe, nice poem.

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~ * D o p e y X o n i c x * ~

Necro Draconis
Member

since 2000-05-19

Posts 115

2 posted 2004-01-16 11:35 AM

Nothing better than something you can relate to! Fabulous

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

3 posted 2004-01-16 04:32 PM

hey thnx for that.
hpe to read sum of ur writing soon

xxgothikaxx

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-01-17 01:20 AM

and in the end at last you'll see -LINKIN PARK BABY YEAH

hardcore write

keep rockin

read my poems k bex???

xx

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