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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28
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tx

0 posted 2004-01-13 05:51 PM


Shed this flesh to start again
cycle through
the hoplessness of
becoming something new
the ambilical tied tight
purge the womb
leave the barren behind
all that you knew
all that you loved
its what you do
born to breed
born to lose
born to die
born to use
this is no exception
you are no excuse
you are the same
broken and bruised


to breathe is to expire
purge yourself
set the flesh on fire

time is on its line
were all on wires
cut the strings
fall in the fire

when it was always wrong
it never mattered
when what you love is gone
nothing matters
and forever seems so long
but still, it does not matter

complacent
and still born
so fragile we shatter
the fragments make the
minds that we struggle to gather
but its time to let go
gathering fragments nomore
let the pieces fall where they may
stay where they lay
im tired of wasting my life away
losing all my time
trading all my days
im going to bleed all
the fetal blood away
from my head
until it fades
the memories struggling to fit
dying to belong
but i have let it go
i will move on


[This message has been edited by xEmperorEmber (01-14-2004 03:59 PM).]

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Xonicx
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since 2004-01-14
Posts 20
Vancouver, WA
1 posted 2004-01-14 11:41 AM


that's pretty cool poem! I write some poems kinda dark, don't know if I can post them bcuz they are kinda crazy.. but good work.

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Defective
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 73
Salisbury NC
2 posted 2004-01-14 11:52 PM


Wow haven't seen that name in a while... how are you? Oh btw lol I'm Kristi... from talkshitty... yeah you probably don't remember me but this is really good, I like it. Well, later. defective_humans on yahoo
xEmperorEmber
Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136
tx
3 posted 2004-01-17 11:15 PM


yea, thats for the replies.. at least someone is reading and not just writing.. lol

later

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