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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
The showers land repeated droplets of calm falling from birth predestined - placements we all signed up leaving behind the travels of deep harbored memories a slumberous why the sparrow flies with the bird and the snowman never believing conception to be again delivered we wander. If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey poe, me likes this, it's groovy!!! =) rok on dude. - River rest upon existence. seek life, |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
I like it!! Had to read it a few times, but I am a slow learner  Good job! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Amazingly good write. Though there is a tinge in here that makes this not completely dark - seems like there's a peice of control in a person's desire to wander. It made me want to explore. Writings, places, travels... now I'm babbling. This really got me thinking. Well done. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
long time no see mystic!!! loved this poem!! awesome keep posting darkness Never be alone, let darkness and shadows be your friends |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks, River, Necro, Endless and Darkness. Sorry I didn't thank you sooner. Been in and out of different sites. Be back soon. wayne If nothing is something |
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