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Melodious_silence
Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37


0 posted 2004-01-07 06:26 PM





Hope you bleed
Hope you cry
Hope you scream
Hope you die

Hope you suffer
Hope you sacrifice
Hope you smother
Hope you say good-bye

Hope it hurts
Hope it stings
Hope it is worse
Hope it is everlasting

Hate you all
Hate the world
Hope you fall
Hope you curdle

Hope you rot
Hope you corrode
Hate you more often that not
Hate you error connection code



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River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-01-07 08:00 PM


wow...this is very...hatefull. (i know...DUHH???) =).

   - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

tainted_love123
Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11
Australia
2 posted 2004-01-07 10:44 PM


its a very powerful write, it has a deeper meaning
Ixxi
Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77
England
3 posted 2004-01-08 05:25 PM


Ouch harsh... That actually hurt my feelings. Weird or what? hehe, very good.
sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90

4 posted 2004-01-08 11:03 PM


wow...i never felt people could hate in this kind of way...welll listen take my advice ..HATING WILL ONLY LEAD YOU TO HELL IN THE WORLD AND IN THE END ...SOO JUST FORGIVE EVEN IF HE KILLLED YOU...ONE DAY HE WILL PAY BACK.....


Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
5 posted 2004-01-11 01:59 PM


Poetry is one of the best ways to release our hate and you did it very well...I liked this one.
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