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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-02-24 08:49 AM



Study the line of the roof of a crystal building against the black speckled sky
And watch the various drips and floods of different shades of blood stretch

Rottened stench of decency decay and chip of filth
Extend another arm and cling to broken walls of faith
Parasite misunderstood
Understanding comprehension of only absorbed by disease

Pride and ego splatter guilt
An ego for us all.

Why live for gold when you can be happy?

[...and the work, it was fun.]-Kurt Cobain

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-02-24 04:12 PM


i can only guess that this is how you feel right now...i'm sorry, i wish there was more that i could do to help =( this as a poem in itself is very imaginitive, you did a great job =). *hugs* i'm still prayin bro.

      - River

sleep my precious slumber

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-02-24 06:22 PM


Very amazin' write. I like this. I hope things get better 4 ya.

~Vampire Kisses  

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-02-24 10:53 PM


*aplauds* I like this...i really like this, hey dude im sorry if this is how you're feeling ......keep posting im a fan of your work

However long the night, the dawn will break.

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