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finklstiltskin
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since 2003-12-26
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Down South, USA

0 posted 2004-01-06 01:56 PM



Remember when the world stopped turning?

When two giants fell and began burning

Still touching the sky, they became pyres

Heaven began to cry to smother the fires



Fink

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Varuch Elohim
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 41
Italy
1 posted 2004-01-06 07:17 PM


This is absolutely beautiful...
Necro Draconis
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since 2000-05-19
Posts 115

2 posted 2004-01-06 07:49 PM


Simple, yet elegant. Bravo!

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.


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