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River
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since 2003-09-16
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my own little world

0 posted 2003-12-30 05:00 PM



As I lay my head down to rest
my thoughts wander and
I wonder if i am doing my best
to live the way I should.

Is there anything I could
do better or worse
to make the pain subside?

Will you answer my call
and tell me it'll be alright (yeah)
hold me close
in the middle of the night
dry my tears away
help me to forget yesterday

She runs away from home
with heavy sobs and teary eyes
wishing today had never come
pleading with God to hear her cries

Is there anything she could
do better or worse
to make the pain subside?

Oh girl, dontcha know?
you deserve to feel this way about it
just let it go
it's not your fault, your okay
the pain will subside
just give it time
you did better than
anyone else could have done
just relax, your okay
we're okay
don't worry on yesterday.

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie Sue Bixler - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-12-31 05:19 PM


Nice.  You're basically just saying forget it, and let it go.

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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
2 posted 2004-01-03 10:26 PM


yeah, i guess the main idea of this wondered didn't it? ...oh well. that's what i meant anyway, you got it. =) ttyl

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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