Dark Poetry #4 |
Rain Falls Heavy |
finklstiltskin Junior Member
since 2003-12-26
Posts 15Down South, USA |
Clouds move fast tonight A siren in the distance A dog answers behind me Screaming, crying The rain falls heavy tonight Washes away the evidence A child learns the news Screaming, crying ©2003 Fink L. Stiltskin Wrong in the Head That guy that told you honesty is the best policy is a big, fat liar. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Wow, this hits hard and fast. It reads so amazingly smoothe and it's very emotionally. Nicely done. |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
very nice. |
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finklstiltskin Junior Member
since 2003-12-26
Posts 15Down South, USA |
'Preciate it, Y'all. Fink For more poetry, art, animations, fiction, and more! |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Short, sweet, to the point. Bravo! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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