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finklstiltskin
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since 2003-12-26
Posts 15
Down South, USA

0 posted 2003-12-29 03:04 PM


Clouds move fast tonight
A siren in the distance
A dog answers behind me
Screaming, crying

The rain falls heavy tonight
Washes away the evidence
A child learns the news
Screaming, crying

©2003 Fink L. Stiltskin
Wrong in the Head

That guy that told you honesty is the best policy is a big, fat liar.

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Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
1 posted 2003-12-29 06:04 PM


Wow, this hits hard and fast.  It reads so amazingly smoothe and it's very emotionally.  Nicely done.
wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
2 posted 2003-12-29 06:05 PM


very nice.
finklstiltskin
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since 2003-12-26
Posts 15
Down South, USA
3 posted 2003-12-30 09:42 AM


'Preciate it, Y'all.

Fink
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Necro Draconis
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since 2000-05-19
Posts 115

4 posted 2003-12-31 03:35 PM


Short, sweet, to the point. Bravo!

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.


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