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Cut off at the Lash
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Cut off at the Lash |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
Mecca under the moon for music in the night Enclosing like a tomb diorama of doomed light Hard bonelike creatures crawling thru the snow Rebellion in their eyes a double dagger glow Romantic heart empires reduced to smoking ash Stems of last prayers being cut off at the lash Spirits searching all around for a love to show Hanging in mid-air til' at last they turn to go |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey i like this it's kool =) keep writing! - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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finklstiltskin Junior Member
since 2003-12-26
Posts 15Down South, USA |
Nice work. Keep it up (and keep us entertained). Fink Wrong in the Head That guy that told you honesty is the best policy is a big, fat liar. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
I really like the doppelgangers, tao. Well done! CB 8) |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very nice poem, it was really well written and I enjoyed reading it. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
I love it! I like the style and sound and well.....everything. Wahoo!! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A dance to a spotlight to failing to move in time to the music. Driving people to damage and destroy by order. Dave |
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