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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2003-12-22 10:32 PM


I'm sorry I
            broke your heart
            killed your soul
please forgive me for letting go
I know when you stare at the sky
you don't really want to fly
you think you caused this
It's not true
I just wasn't ready
to give my all to you

I see your face
a mask covering the pain
don't say that your ok
I know your eyes
don't give me lies

the road was long
the end was hard
I did you wrong
our hearts are marred

I'm sorry
          if that's the right word
I'm sorry
          for causing you hurt
please move on to a better life
be a Samurai man
with a noble wife
and forget the days that where
just know
          that tomorrow will be better.

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie Sue Bixler - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-12-22 11:44 PM


Pretty good.  I liked this.

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River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
2 posted 2003-12-23 12:09 PM


that's good, it's my own story, lol, i actually know what i'm talking about. later bro.

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-12-23 09:34 AM


A very painful place to be in emotions. Hurts alot.
Merry christmas, and Happy New Year!  
Terri~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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4 posted 2004-02-23 03:11 AM



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