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Dark Poetry #4

Captive of Hate

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

0 posted 2003-12-22 12:23 PM

I am lost.
Lifes true sacrifice has stolen me, and i am captive of its hate.
These chains i bear keep me in this world of solitude.
My mind now deranged and helpless, still believes in light
But my eyes now too blinded to see for their purpose, do not.
Why was i locked up here?
Was my fate determined to this kingdom of darkness?
Is this pain a return for my malice of love?
My vulnerability lies alone with me and i feel the darkness engulf me.
The hate releases and the death grips hard.
I laugh for my once loved life.
I shout for my lost soul and lost spirit.
I cry for my hungry body.
And i scream for my everlasting pain.

xoxLORxox

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

1 posted 2003-12-22 05:17 PM

This one is painful, painful and true. I commend you for the bare truth in this one, beautiful, just beautiful.

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

2 posted 2003-12-22 06:58 PM

thanks heaps.
I really meant those words in that one

xoxLORxox

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2003-12-22 10:32 PM

LOR!!!
i love it so much!!
wow amqazing stuff and i agree with hatter sooo painful and soooo true

welkl well done darl...
talk to ya later dudette
(L) roph(L)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-20 02:01 AM

This was an extremely powerful write. I feel for you! .......jo

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

5 posted 2004-01-20 04:34 PM

HULLO THERE!!!!
HOW HVE U BEEN!?!
LOVD THIS POEM ADORED IT! MISSIN YAZ

BEX

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