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buckysimone
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since 2003-10-19
Posts 27


0 posted 2003-12-19 10:05 PM


the lights turns out
shadows creep beside my legs
nightmares become reality
dignity thrown upon the floor
mops and brooms
silhouettes of sopranos
altos and tenors
standing naked through winters
winters flame of agony
igniting through paper-bag walls
walls of my house
through the rain
walls tumbling down
graphic graffiti through
through plastic windows
suffocation of the stench
bed once filled
fully with springs
blanket of words
trash bag pillowcase dreams
urination coats the bleeding concrete
floors of feet
bare foot
walking through on cuts
cuts like ocean shells
beach
beach visited as a child
coated with pollution
dead seagulls and poached whales
peoples hands reach
reach for me
grabbing
releasing my clammy hands
laughter follows, malodorous bedroom
i will go down
turn out the lights.

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River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-06-13 12:19 PM


hey, this sounds a lot like a dream to me! especially this part =)  "silhouettes of sopranos
altos and tenors
standing naked through winters" talk about unexpectedly strange shocking...interesting dream I like =)

         - River

Running out of pain

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