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southern sweetheart
Junior Member
since 2003-12-28
Posts 18


0 posted 2004-02-23 09:30 PM


the feelings over power me
i'm wanting to get away
most of the time
but i never let that show
so i guess thats why you dont know
or maybe you've guessed
that im dying alittle each day
so please dont freak
i didnt write this to make you upset
i just wrote it inside of doing something else
inside of trying to get away
so maybe you've  just saved me
look really i think im ok
so dont worry
i'll get through this some day

© Copyright 2004 jamie - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-02-23 11:29 PM


I loved it

im saving this

thankyou so much

I LOVE IT

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

southern sweetheart
Junior Member
since 2003-12-28
Posts 18

2 posted 2004-02-24 11:48 AM


thanx im so happy i wasnt sure if i liked it
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