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your little hanky..
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your little hanky.. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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it's pouring rain,is that you crying,is that your pain...or is it just mother nature pretending to be you...everybody wants to be you,don't they. do you want to be you,do you?...are you happy?...are you ok?...living with the pain isnt as easy as you thought it would be,is it? cry on my shoulder,that's all i'm here for..you,it's all about you..it's all about you..why would anyone want to see me,if its you they came to see,if it's you they paid to see. i'm just your little hanky,pull me out,use me,and store me away,till you need me again... [This message has been edited by exhale (12-09-2003 09:47 PM).] |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
i love how as i read that i totally felt all the emotions... i felt nagry as cus he was using her and all that awesome as |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hmmm...this is unforunatly true in a lot of cases. good job =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
I share your feelings, exhale. I know the feeling of being used  . This is a really powerful poem with threads of sarcasm in between :p. Fantastico!- James |
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