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kissa~rachelle
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0 posted 2004-02-23 12:31 PM



You left me here,
cold, bitter, and lost.
Lost in the darkness,
the dakness you created.
I remember when you looked at me,
with your deep, dark eyes.
I could see into your soul,
and i know you could see into mine.
I could jsut look at you,
and feel you,
feel your passion, your love.
Then one day that passion was gone.
replaced with complete darkness.
Did i create your darkness,
like you created mine?
Did I creep into your thoughts,
your heart, your soul,
and corrupt them with pain?
no?
Then why do you corrupt me?
I did nothing but love you.
Then again,
maybe that is why.
Maybe that is why,
why, even in the brighness of the day,
I am still lost in this darkness,
this darkness you created.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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1 posted 2004-02-23 01:06 AM


i really liked this


kissa~rachelle
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2 posted 2004-02-23 10:29 PM


Thnks. ~lol~ I do too.

~Vampire Kisses  

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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