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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-12-08 11:45 PM

Confused, I have to clear my enemy
This obstacle within myself
To a world of comfortable and normal human beings
A world I have felt distant and lost from in a puddle of my own guilt

Sometimes I feel cursed and just want out
The light of excitment, my melodic soul
Someone hear me and listen to what I say
Guilty cloud and absent stare
To a belonging someone to

A nervousness of experience and containment
Let me live
Voodoo woman with immature rage and much too precious attitude
Let me live
A soul of my own

Weight of depression and saddness
Lack of hope grinding my direction to a stand still and stop

I can see what she has done and what to do
but where to go
I'm lost again in this plastic coated world that seems to melt under pressure
And direction can come only from myself if it doesn't rot away into the nothingness of oblivion and eternal sleep a freedom of myself

The rest of the world is so beautiful, even if just a peek.

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2003-12-09 12:34 PM

this is deep, lots to think about there, "I'm lost again in this plastic coated world that seems to melt under pressure" ...that's an interesting line to...neva woulda thought o dat. =) any who...ttttttttyyyylllllaterzzzz

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-12-09 09:39 AM

Craig>

these are the most insightful words
I have read in a long time:

Let me live
A soul of my own

YES
*smile*
and please do

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-12-09 06:25 PM

stand still and stop
maybe one or the other.

you talk about wanting a soul of your own and then that you want freedom from yourself in sleep.
you sound confused.

I know how this is, this is a perfect poem for my day.
the first stanza is amazing, it is how I feel A LOT.
beautiful words, Craig.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-12-09 07:38 PM

Thanx for the responses.

GIS

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

[This message has been edited by green_itchy_stuff (12-10-2003 09:32 AM).]

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-12-10 06:20 PM

greeny, first read i liked this but gotta come back to it so ill give you a better response in a few...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

6 posted 2003-12-11 09:00 PM

i'm listening. this is a reall y intense and powerful write, adding this for sure. now that i ahve gone back and read it more in depth this seems like a call out to anyone out there, i very much enjoyed reading this

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-12-12 05:52 PM

I guess you heard me then didn't you. Thanx.

GIs

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

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