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alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2003-12-08 07:13 PM



Antique lace
daintily spread across half rotted face.
Eyes, soft and blue,
melted and oozing gently towards you.
Skin that once was warm
slipping away in the storm.
Hair the color of fire
fading into the mire.
One last tear
escaped, frozen in the fear
Leave me not,
here among the rot.
Did you mark where I lay
as you walked away?


Is my grave that old?


      I am

             so

                 cold.

Until...ali {alibaster "the Queen of Darkness"}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratc

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River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2003-12-08 09:43 PM


geeze this is chilling. nice write =)

       - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-12-09 09:37 AM


oooh ali, I like this one
dark beauty , m'friend

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