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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04
Posts 92
PA, USA

0 posted 2003-12-08 02:15 AM


He used to wear a smile on his face
but now with time, it has faded away
I hear him talking of doing scary things
in order to end all his suffering and pain.

I promised him that I'd be there
for he was my love, my reason to live
I can't make him happy though...
and he takes more than I can give.

There is no cure for his depression
the pills the doctor prescribed don't work
he is changing into someone else because of it
and it is only me now that he is trying to avert.

I don't want him to hurt himself
doesn't he know that life goes this way?
we all have our personal ups and downs
and sometimes the agony can last for days.

What has happened to him, tell me please
he used to be so happy, now his eyes seem so sad
I don't know what I would do without him....
how can I make him see that life isn't that bad?

But when he tells me on the phone everyday
that today is the day that he's going to end it
I don't know what to do, what to say....
other than 'I love you, don't do this!'

Do those words even help him?
I feel like I am in the dark here
should I tell his parents....?
would they watch him and keep him near?

He says he can rely on only me
that I am the one person that he can trust
I just wish I could bring back his smile
and stop his frequent suicidal rush.

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-12-08 05:08 AM


Hey Girl . . .

your doing the best you can
just by caring and loving him
and this?

is amazing writing . . .
I do know very well
exactly where you are
and may he realize his place too

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2003-12-10 01:57 AM


as you say
his depression is severe and cnt be fixed by pills...
all you can do is keep reminding him that you do love him
and that the pain will end soon

kia kaha-stand strong

its amazing that u are bale to write about this kind of thing and make me feel part of it
amazing s***

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