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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-07 10:28 PM


another wasted breath, used to talk to you...is it really worth it?...
tell me what i should do,tell me if i should cry,if i should bleed...would any of it make me feel better?
anything is better than this feeling
i feel like someone took my insides and tied them in a knot and threw them back inside of me,then took my heart ripped it open and filled it with broken peices of glass,tearing at my soul at every heart beat...
every heart beat...

© Copyright 2003 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
1 posted 2003-12-07 11:15 PM


Very painful poem, hard to read such pain.  I live in Alberta too.
darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2003-12-08 12:19 PM


as soon as i read it i felt that persons pain.
i know how that feels as well.
it hurt to read... i like how dark it was
youre work never stops amazing me

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-12-08 05:05 AM


Chelsea?

Good Lord this is awesome writing

nice bleed

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