I Killed You (Because You Are Me)

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Dark Poetry #4

I Killed You (Because You Are Me)

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2003-12-07 09:53 PM

Six feet under
I bury my mind
Because I caused death to yours

Six feet under
I bury my soul
Because I murdered yours

Six feet under
Your body rests
With a note
Pinned on your dress
I killed you
I killed me

Six feet under
I bury my dreams
Because I brought down yours

Six feet under
I bury my heart
Because tiny pieces I made yours

Six feet under
Your body rests
With a note
Pinned on your dress
I killed you
I killed me

Six feet under
I bury my hopes
Because I made you forget

Six feet under
I bury my morals
Because I erased yours

Six feet under
Your body rests
With a note
Pinned on your dress
I killed you
I killed me

Six feet under
I bury my destiny
Because I ceased your path

Six feet under
I bury my body
Because you are me.

Six feet under
Your body rests
With a note
Pinned on your dress
I killed you
I killed me

Because you are me
You are me
You are me

Because you are me

~*~*~*~*

I'm sorry if this is a little too...Um...frightening for some...I have no idea where this came from. Obviously somewhere I haven't visited in a long time. Enjoy. But if you don't: My sincerest apologies.

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2003-12-08 12:43 PM

dragon!!!!
you blew my breath away!!!
i know were ur coming from...
i visit that place often to...
i like the repeat of the poem... very cool.

awesome write... PLEASE POST MORE i wnt to read them...

darkness

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-12-08 05:06 AM

Tanya?

no , not frightening at all

sounds like time for rebirth to me
*smile*
always enjoy reading you

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

3 posted 2003-12-08 06:02 PM

Well done....
Until..

Until...ali {alibaster "the Queen of Darkness"}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratc

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2003-12-09 07:46 PM

very dark, nicely written.

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