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poeticfighter New Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 7 |
sorry about the name but i really had no title for this one Alone at her bedside I say One Hand tucked into deep pockets Chest filled with the stagnant tension filled air that Engulfed the once hopeful few Young was I but not to stupid There was something ABOUT to happen A sudden cold breeze made the sounds that kept the conversation between Everyone’s eyes going In the shudder of the cold I suddenly realized the Stares of confusion that surrounded me on this bed lay my hearts fleshly resting place , god’s gift to man A rose worth waking up to smell a fragrance unparalleled to all Yet even with the look of death in her eyes The rose still showed her petals And thought still unaware of this present dilemma I stretched forth my hand shaking with unknown fear In my eye's corner I saw the tears of my second family I looked back towards the bed to see a pool of radiance The sadness seemed to be transferring to everyone My heart felt the downward pull of grief the pull of pain How much longer till we can be together Till I can hold you without the help of a man made apparatus Holding the key to your happiness your joy The freedom that was stolen from you for me The tight grip I had was wearing out The room around me now blurred became as backdrop As god's indication of sorrow became evident My eye's immediately closed and I was no longer there In a dream instilled by the warmth near me I saw the days' gone by I seemed like only yesterday we were running through the blessings of god now i was missing the feeling so badly ,angered by the downs of life as i was in the bliss of the past i smelt a delicate fragrance and felt the soft cloudlike warmth on my face engulf my body my cheeks were streaming with warmth and in that moment it was almost the same as always....almost with the air out my lungs , those seconds without air seemed like hours i wanted to say something but what there was a lump in my throat i poked my finger on the left side i felt a sickness like no other and there was no known cure i reached over to look into the source of the radiant river i froze for a moment my body ceased to function i peered deep into that river till i could see myself and when i looked beyond that i recieved a sence of lost time the cross like pendant that hung from my neck now rested on my sexualy opposites' torso the reminder of a great past and hopeful future times together i took no notice of the meter to the front of me the beeping sound was slower than when i first walked in i wasn't very observant for a sixteen year old and neither was she as the beeping grew further and further apart from one another and the people around drew in closer so as to set a unwelcome mood i took no notice of how close our faces were to each other and to the people on the other side of the bed a peaceful yet weak touch came to my lips startled a bit i pulled back my left hand now dangerously close to the breathing apparatus when i had reached my distance i heard a beeping sound i opened my eyes and saw the green light go red i pulled away from a kiss i had reluctantly waited on for so long only to discover the her hands now cold and sweating had touched lips i reached to grab her falling hands people came rushing in wearing white coats and i was ripped away from her side in tears i escaped the arrest and rushed to her side again only to hear her last words of amnesty WITH THE LOVE OF GOD IN ME FOREVER AND ALWAYS I FORGIVE YOU!!!!! } |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
What a lovely collection of words. This was beautiful. Somehow I feel richer for having read it. Forgiveness is so full of light that this write shouldn't be in "dark." Love, Terri~  Well I will go down with this ship |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
poetic . . . you write beautifully your brought me right there on this bed lay my hearts fleshly resting place , god’s gift to man A rose worth waking up to smell a fragrance unparalleled to all THIS are astounding lines and rest knowing she and yourself are now at peace *smile* also the title? it is perfect considering . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (12-07-2003 06:40 PM).] |
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poeticfighter New Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 7 |
THANKS i really didn't know what section to put this glad u liked it......... |
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