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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110


0 posted 2003-12-07 12:20 PM



In the vernacular of the cataclysm
It was I who knew it best
I dreamt a dreary dream that darkened
Disturbing that it brought me rest
I walked upon a path of bones
Paved of sorrow and scattered stones
I am the simple device of a simple hate
I do not breath I asphyxiate
I was one who pushed a button
Who knew the troubled hand?
That fell on red and idolized man
But I saw it saw the impending dread
I was one who pushed a button
Gleefully leaving them already dead
For all their laws they could not please us
Their book of lies and plastic Jesus
Distinguished by my world of hate
Dip and sway as you immolate
I was that terror that comes anon
Dread lord of the waning sun
From whence I came I now am gone

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2003-12-07 02:27 AM


This is good.  It sounds like a very nice piece.

GIS

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
2 posted 2003-12-07 03:20 PM


Wow, this piece is amazing, very well written and very dark.  I love the way you described everything, nice, nice, nice.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-12-07 06:36 PM


Kuru:
this reminded me of the four horseman
brought into a modern day society
beautiful writing

KuruShio
Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

4 posted 2003-12-08 12:31 PM


Tank you GIS


LittleWing:
the four horsemen of the apocalypse?  I have heard of them but I am not aquainted with them. perhaps you shall introduce us


Hatter thank you praise from a like mind is enjoyable.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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