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DarK][StorM
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0 posted 2003-12-05 06:43 PM


Waking up and looking outside
Realizing something so beatiful is such a disaster
Trapt inside, not able to leave
Like a cage or bear trap
Seems like days past by...
still no chance, still stuck
the night passes
things go back to normal
....snow.

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-12-05 10:46 PM


interesting piece
littlewing
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2 posted 2003-12-06 08:05 PM


Hey Dark,
living where I do
that one word:
SNOW

says it all
*smile*
nice write
xxoo

junemac
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3 posted 2003-12-07 03:26 PM


short to the point and oh so true .....

love this

june x

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-12-08 11:14 AM


I don't get snow where I live but I can understand what the point is.  This poem is interesting and intriguing.

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5 posted 2003-12-08 12:57 PM


I can see how you feel that way...I won't live anywhere there is snow
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