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gpc
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since 2003-03-01
Posts 43


0 posted 2004-02-22 12:49 PM


Out of the front door,
The Western Front. War on
Public transport and irate
Shoppers.

Cracks in the pavement.
Cracking families that
Scream in their Volvos.

Trees die to the side
Of the road. Punctuated by
Dog **** . The Environmentalists
Try to persuade it's global
Warming. The cynics say
It's just autumn.

The street hums with restruant
Conversation emptiness,
And Land Rovers.
Endless Land Rovers.

Turn into the main road
Where man meets cafe. Unaware
That the service charge isn't
Included.

Dips and valleys criss-cross
Pavements and fling themselves
Into the road. The cars never
Stop. The cracks perpetuate.

Impatient lions and tigers

Growl at children, as they

Parade their innocence over

The hide of a slaughtered zebra.

Safety first, creativity second.

And now safely across,
The pub. Children are steered
Away lest they should see their
Fathers. Under new management.
But it's still the same. It's just that
Now people get thrown out of the
Back door.

NO DRINKING ON THE FORECOURT means
NO DRUNKARDS ON THE FORECOURT.

Past the cememtery and all those
Famous Dead Guys.
The high street tends to get people
Down.

The toy shop's orange
Walls keep the youthful
Glow radiating whilst the
Play things are securely
Locked away in cupboards.

The last scene in the montage,
The Mercedes dealership (save the best
Till last).
And mid-life crisis aged men
Make new child against
New car cost comparisons,
While their wives pick
Baby names in the dwindling
Light of the village hall.

© Copyright 2004 gpc - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-02-23 12:00 PM


Umm.. wow. This was good. I like it, some of it was sorta confusing, but I understood it okay at the end. ~lol~ Nice write.

~Vampire Kisses  

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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