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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I'm sitting here wondering at the speed of life So many things hurtling by and I sit The planet of solid ground that I sit on even moves Rusted, forgotten, a lack of motion Convinced I feel as if I shouldn't have Perfect soldier, tainted soul Dead, dying, here Screaming inside, from the pits of silence Quiet falling tree Crowd too good, much to perfect for me Dismissed to the dungeon for my sins Trick, it was all a game I've done nothing wrong Bleeding for it just the same Still and calm now I can still hear the music in my head This only giving light that makes me look up Where they denied, melodic tunes comfort Almost lost rotten stain on the earth Got to move, continue, alive Breathing beneath the pressure Nothing is anything that is to much for me There is a way A way because I have a will |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
1, 2, 3, breathe....count to 10....breathe. This write left me with the feeling of keep on keepin' on.  Love, Terri~  Well I will go down with this ship And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido [This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-05-2003 04:41 PM).] |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Artistic =) very... geeze you could paint pictures with this. I like it a lot too. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
*adds to library* =) Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you everybody. And I just reallized the paint a picture thing. You could. THanx for pointing that out. GIS Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
good for you Craig this reminds me of Soundgardens "Fourth of July" go check it out beautiful writing xxoo |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
"Trick, it was all a game I've done nothing wrong Bleeding for it just the same" mmmmmmm this is the stuff i live, err... die for. "Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. " Dylan Thomas Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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poeticfighter New Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 7 |
great poem loved it |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
THanx everybody. It's nice to hear all the things you said. GIS Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
A very nice poem indeed. Dark and painful. Love it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx for the complements No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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