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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883


0 posted 2003-12-02 09:53 AM


With tantalizing juices
the colors can vary.
One - maybe round
while the other..
You know,
like that difference
to know
how we look
and how some - summon
those daily consistencies,
tasting the blind contents
as we run through
each barrier,
without knowing the first.
Who are we.
Why are… we
entitled to only the exteriors
without suggestion
to touch… our insides.
This, our closer than close.
Which we don’t even know.

So…
how can we,
begin to surmise.
That malingering
difference...
Which lies inside.
Others...



If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.



[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (12-02-2003 11:11 AM).]

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Loverlost
Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89
UK
1 posted 2003-12-02 10:23 AM


WE cant..we cant. Like you Im still trying to work me out!

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-12-02 11:54 AM


Thanks for commenting Loverlost, Yes, these feelings seem like there will always be around us. All we can do is to try our best to understand one another, starting with our selves. Thanks for responding and have a WONDERFUL HOILDAY SEASON!!

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-12-02 08:09 PM


i like this, for some reason it makes me wanna go eat turkey...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

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