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Dark Poetry #4

Triumph

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

0 posted 2003-11-27 08:15 PM

This one is fairly short but its still one of my favorites.

The dripping drops
The sizzling sigh
The blade that bleeds
While wondering why

Her face fey
Her sinew strained
The banelings broken
Upon the stretching stain

With triumph trudge
While stepping smudge
The acrid ash
Black with blood

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

1 posted 2003-11-27 08:53 PM

now one of my favorutes too, well done

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-11-29 08:15 AM

well done

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-11-29 10:21 PM

I read this a few times, and the more I read it. The more I could see. Very nice write.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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