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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-02-21 09:30 PM



Darkness surrounds me,
as i walk out the door,
into the cold, dark, nothingness of the night.
The stars gleam blissfully,
and the moon is hidden by the bare, leafless trees.
Like out of some Dracula horror.
I take in every movement,
every sound.
and i know this is where i belong.
The strange creatures of the night
prowl the streets, just as I.
They accept me as one of them.
No cruel jokes,
or loathing looks.
I can be myself.
The windwhistles calmly, soothingly,
talking to me, accepting me.
No need for a mask anymore.
The wind carries it to a far away place.
The sun begins to rise,
and the night melts away,
taking me with it.
Suddenly that far away place,
isnt so far away anymore.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-02-21 09:35 PM


You did this one before as well didnt you...

lol did that get deleted too?

I got one deleted and i didnt remember how it went so i cant re-do it at all!

lol love ur poems soo much

LOR

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-02-21 09:43 PM


Yeah, it did. I write my poems in my journal alot so i just looked back. I love your poems too.
~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
3 posted 2004-02-24 02:06 AM


hey! yeah i thought i recognised this one too!

hehe.

i like this one but i feel its almost like a clone of your other ones... maybe its just me. i dunno!

but it definitly had a good rhythm and purpose.

catch ya later

darkness

btw i too loooove ur poems.

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
4 posted 2004-02-24 06:14 PM


Yeah i see where you could get the whole clone thing. I love using the night, and the wind in my poems and i catch myself doing that a lot. lol  

Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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