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Dark Poetry #4

above the clouds

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-11-26 03:20 PM

I want to take a bottle of gasoline and pour
from above these clouds.
I want to make it all come down in big red flames.
I want to be the one to burn up the rain.
have the fire curl up in my face like one big smile,
and just laugh and call it a day.
Sit and watch my creation.
the smell is sickeningly sweet
as the droplets cease to give birth to tears.
When theres pain there's tears.
So no one getting hurt.
AS I murder the rain.
And no one can find the killer
cause she's hiding up inside the gray.
my sceme is upon thin paper,
my heart beats below weary skin.
So I keep staring,
the same eyes, that refuse to shine.
I succum to the dampness
pentration.
gas
fumes
sugar
sweet
just hand me the lighter

I can not write lately, I don't know what my problem is. So be harsh if you want, I need to getting writing again. Thanks for your time.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-11-26 03:33 PM

I want to make it all come down in big red flames.

I think at one time or another we all wish to be in control and end the "rain".

nice
M

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-11-27 01:02 AM

i really enjoyed reading this lexy, good write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

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