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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110


0 posted 2003-11-23 12:13 PM


Slam down the quill!
Invoke the Muse's will!

Question Life. Query death.
Write me up
An epitaph.


Is this the Attrition of man?
I'm gilded saint.
I'm son of Sam.

Give in!
Sleep.
Forget life.
Weep!

Rip out thy eyes and see Truth!
Calculating wisdom,
Youth.

More over Aged.
Wretched crone. Blighted sage!
Stand Alone.

Did He dream it I wonder?
Did He Conjure?

Did He BLUNDER!

Out of ash
Brine, and Sand
Arise anew
Become
Man?

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

© Copyright 2003 KuruShio - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-11-23 01:05 AM


Kuru,

many fine writes I see evolving in each part here . . . a rebirth?

Question Life. Query death.
Write me up
An epitaph.

I adore this
xxoo

KuruShio
Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

2 posted 2003-11-23 11:21 AM


Just a bit of rambling really.

Most of my stuff has to do with the rebirth of the world after a nuclear war and my rebirth after that war.

again thanks for the post

coyote
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

3 posted 2003-11-23 07:08 PM


Ash, brine, and sand.

Interesting formula for resurrection....

a most prophetic piece.

I liked it much.

coyote 8)

Brad Majors
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Georgia
4 posted 2003-11-23 11:30 PM


Brilliantly penned
River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
5 posted 2003-11-26 10:56 PM


I love this =) great job Kuru.

        - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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