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coyote
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0 posted 2003-11-22 01:11 PM


It snows here as I write this.......the mountains close themselves...................................
like grand halls in winter......quiet...pristine...
isolated......their souls placed in deep slumber, as do the great bears.

Alas, there are times......... when I
.......envy the oblivion.


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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-11-22 11:37 PM


Coyote?

me too  . . .
and this reminded me of a fresh
snowfall you know?  when it is all
quiet and everything just seems
"right"
*smile*
beautiful
xxoo

coyote
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2 posted 2003-11-23 11:18 AM


Thanks, littlewing.
I'm glad you responded so kindly.

coyote 8)

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-11-24 10:19 AM


beautiful write
coyote
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4 posted 2003-11-24 10:47 PM


Thank You, Brad.
I appreciate the read and kind comments.

coyote 8)

Temptress
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5 posted 2003-12-02 12:37 PM


ME TOO!

beautifully done!

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


coyote
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6 posted 2003-12-03 06:40 PM


Thank You, Temptress, for reading and commenting so kindly.

CB 8)

darkness_witch
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7 posted 2003-12-05 05:43 PM


coyote!!!

amazing wow

i know were ur coming from!
*sighs* aww to be oblivious
haha
darkness

Kia Kaha

coyote
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8 posted 2003-12-05 07:17 PM


Thank You, darkness_witch.
Your read and comments are greatly appreciated.

coyote

mysticpoe
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9 posted 2003-12-05 09:06 PM


"the mountains close themselves." real nice line. sounds fresh to me. Like the wintry air. Enjoyed the write coyote.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

coyote
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10 posted 2003-12-06 01:15 PM


Thanks, for stopping by to read, poe.
I appreciate your comments.

coyote 8)

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